I thought I was a member of a writing group on this site, or perhaps that was on another website forum. Anyways I would like feedback on my latest article just as long as feedback is only on this article and not on something else that I wrote (which would be off topic). Also I am not interested in theological debates as my audience and intended reader is dispensationalist, and I have no plan or purpose to try and persuade Reformed and others of a different persuasion. A reviewer can give my article a 1-2 star review because I have not presented enough evidence for a Reformed person to change his mind, but that was never my intended purpose nor agenda when I wrote the article!!
http://www.cerm.info/bible_studies/Eschatology/second_coming.htm
Do you see any glaring spelling and grammar errors? HTML errors? Or other ways to smooth my writing. My editor approved this article and she has done a good job at previous articles. However sometimes editors make mistakes, or add a meaning I never intended.
Thanks..
John
